Um. No. XD; Now that you say it I can see it, but it looks like REALLY COOL shadows honestly. The sploosh confused me. The 'wet' doesn't look much different from the 'fire' XD;.
Maybe more panels of water filling the room would help. 1 would probably suffice. Also, although it's less thematically relevant, the tea cup falls and then rolls that motion line on the floor, right? That might do well with some onomatopoeia, rather than just the rotation lines coming off of it. To make sure this doesn;t sound as if I'm being too critical, the colouring is very nice. Hard to do that with watercolour.
I could tell that water came down the chimney and put the fire out, but didn't realise the room was filling with water either. I too thought it was some cool shadows, but I was also looking at Brand and Sunfire rather than the rest of the room.
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i was actually more confused about the tea cup. it took me a second to realize what it is. but that may be just me being tired.
Um. No. XD; Now that you say it I can see it, but it looks like REALLY COOL shadows honestly. The sploosh confused me. The 'wet' doesn't look much different from the 'fire' XD;.
Sad that watercolors make me struggle to paint water.
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If it's super un-clear, this next page is going to make NO sense. Damn.
Maybe more panels of water filling the room would help. 1 would probably suffice. Also, although it's less thematically relevant, the tea cup falls and then rolls that motion line on the floor, right? That might do well with some onomatopoeia, rather than just the rotation lines coming off of it. To make sure this doesn;t sound as if I'm being too critical, the colouring is very nice. Hard to do that with watercolour.
I thought it was obvious, what with the sploosh and all.
It was very clear to me
I could tell that water came down the chimney and put the fire out, but didn't realise the room was filling with water either. I too thought it was some cool shadows, but I was also looking at Brand and Sunfire rather than the rest of the room.
clear to me.
I could deal that water was filling the room because I couldn't see the legs of the table and chairs. :p
I would have been able to tell if I spent a little while more looking. 'Cause yeah, it looks like the floor is obscured by something flowy.
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