Friday, April 25, 2008

Page 47 - No.

I just...don't like this page. Just don't like it. I like page 48, which is next Wednesday's update, but this one...not so much.

Can't win them all, I guess.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

I don't like it so much either. I get the whole David sees the world in clearly defined black and white art style. David's guide being the only thing in grey shading makes sense too...

But the faces are messed up with this style, especially the noses. The faces had always been one of your strong points in previous styles.

~ Pandra, first time poster<3

Anonymous said...

If there's anything that strikes me as "off" in this page, it's Epoch's hand in the first panel. Its placement seems.... funny.